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lo siento no entreis es una tonteria,

Tema en 'OFF TOPIC' iniciado por jaime_rider, 24 Nov 2006.

  1. jaime_rider

    jaime_rider Novato

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    Tenia que acer esto xa klase de ingles y no me lo puedo mandar al mail lo pongo aki xa luego kojerlo kuando este en kasa, lo siento!!gracias!
    Strange Ivan

    It was January of last year. The holidays were just over and we were back at school. Ivan, was a happy guy, but he was not happy these days. He didn’t want to do anything, because he was so sad. Something was wrong with him.
    A couple of days later, Ivan still was sad.
    My mom was a teacher at our school, so she also knew that Ivan was sad.
    One evening, after school my mom asked me: “How is Ivan these days?” and I answered: “He looks sad mom, but I don’t know what is going on!” Then I asked her: “Do you know why is he like this?” but she answered no.
    The next day, my mom called me to the main office. I went down and she told me that Ivan’s dad had came to the school, and she said that Ivan’s mom was dying, she only had a couple of days more…
    After this, we didn’t know more about Ivan’s mom, there were a couple of days that Ivan didn’t come to the school but we didn’t know if Ivan’s mom was dead or anything.
    One month later, my mom called me again to the main office. Ivan’s dad came again to the school, but this time he said that Maria, Ivan’s mom, was dead, she dead two days ago after the first time that he came to the school. At first, I was really confused because Ivan didn’t tell me anything about his mom, and I was one of his best friends.
    Time was passing, but Ivan continued the same, he was better, maybe he forgot it and he didn’t tell me this, nobody knew it, only me but he didn’t know it.
    One Saturday in May, I went with Ivan to a mall to watch a movie. Ivan, had a motorcycle and he always drove me. This Saturday the police stopped us, we didn’t know why and we were really scared. They asked us if we were throwing stuff to a house, but we weren’t doing anything, so we answered no. The policeman asked Ivan for the motorcycle stuff and papers and he showed it to them. Ivan’s motorcycle was paid for his mom and on the papers it was Maria’s signature. They asked him if she was his mom, he said yes and they check it. Suddenly Ivan looked at me and told me: “If they want to call my mother to check it it’s gonna be a little bit difficult, she dead months ago.” I didn’t know what to do or say so I didn’t do anything.
    Finally, the police left us go and we watched the movie.
    That evening I told my mom that Ivan told me that his mom is dead, and she asked me: “Why now? Why not when she dead?” My mom doesn’t like when I go on motorcycle so I couldn’t tell her that it was because the police stopped us, so I told her that I didn’t know why. She only said that this guy was so strange.

    End.
     
  2. Dirty Sanchez

    Dirty Sanchez el friky de Potongo

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    all about Ivan
     
  3. Andriwww

    Andriwww The Gold Member

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    ******,no es mas facil mandartelo por correo???
    Dew
     
  4. BiGHiT_NaY

    BiGHiT_NaY Rim destroyer

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    que parte de no puedo enviarmelo al email no has entendio

    ^___^
     
  5. gtzone

    gtzone Novato

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    Pues te lo envias por MP...


    ¬¬
     
  6. megadavi77

    megadavi77 full toxo experience

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    volviendo a los origenes
    ni por leer ese tochooo

    Pero me he fijado en que basta que ponga "no entreis es una tonteria "
    para que venga todo dios (y me incluyo)
    ya lo vereis
    jajjajaja
     
  7. franchute_mtb

    franchute_mtb www.lamelateam.tk

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    Tienes toda la razón tio jajaja
     
  8. flykuko

    flykuko BmXero

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    no puedo leer tanto me bloqueo y me maeo XD
     
  9. flykuko

    flykuko BmXero

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    y menos en ingles
     
  10. Skycat

    Skycat Novato

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    Está muy bien escrito, alguna que otra falta por aquí y por ahí y la historia un poco extranya (sí, ny, no me funciona la tecla apropiada xD).

    "My mom doesn’t like when I go on motorcycles so I couldn’t tell her that it was because the police"

    No te olvides de la "s" ya que sin ella lo que has puesto es incorrecto. ;)

    Un saludo
     
  11. Andriwww

    Andriwww The Gold Member

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    Creo k no e entendido nada de esa parte.
    Dew
     
  12. jaime_rider

    jaime_rider Novato

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    weno ya lo korregire gracias skycat
     
  13. jaime_rider

    jaime_rider Novato

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    lo siento no se me ha ocurrido mandarmelo por mp pero si tanto molesta lo siento, lo primero que pone esq no teneis xq entrar.
     
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    pues que razón teneis, solo falta k ponga NO ENTREIS ES UNA TONTERIA para k todo dios venga a mirar k **** hay.. jajaj
     
  15. epo-mtb

    epo-mtb Personajillo Del Bosque

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    noyaaaaa!! yo nada mas ver el titulo, me dieron ganas de entrar
     
  16. Domki

    Domki Uno que va to loko

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    que hay aqui? caramelos? :D
     

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