Tenia que acer esto xa klase de ingles y no me lo puedo mandar al mail lo pongo aki xa luego kojerlo kuando este en kasa, lo siento!!gracias! Strange Ivan It was January of last year. The holidays were just over and we were back at school. Ivan, was a happy guy, but he was not happy these days. He didnt want to do anything, because he was so sad. Something was wrong with him. A couple of days later, Ivan still was sad. My mom was a teacher at our school, so she also knew that Ivan was sad. One evening, after school my mom asked me: How is Ivan these days? and I answered: He looks sad mom, but I dont know what is going on! Then I asked her: Do you know why is he like this? but she answered no. The next day, my mom called me to the main office. I went down and she told me that Ivans dad had came to the school, and she said that Ivans mom was dying, she only had a couple of days more After this, we didnt know more about Ivans mom, there were a couple of days that Ivan didnt come to the school but we didnt know if Ivans mom was dead or anything. One month later, my mom called me again to the main office. Ivans dad came again to the school, but this time he said that Maria, Ivans mom, was dead, she dead two days ago after the first time that he came to the school. At first, I was really confused because Ivan didnt tell me anything about his mom, and I was one of his best friends. Time was passing, but Ivan continued the same, he was better, maybe he forgot it and he didnt tell me this, nobody knew it, only me but he didnt know it. One Saturday in May, I went with Ivan to a mall to watch a movie. Ivan, had a motorcycle and he always drove me. This Saturday the police stopped us, we didnt know why and we were really scared. They asked us if we were throwing stuff to a house, but we werent doing anything, so we answered no. The policeman asked Ivan for the motorcycle stuff and papers and he showed it to them. Ivans motorcycle was paid for his mom and on the papers it was Marias signature. They asked him if she was his mom, he said yes and they check it. Suddenly Ivan looked at me and told me: If they want to call my mother to check it its gonna be a little bit difficult, she dead months ago. I didnt know what to do or say so I didnt do anything. Finally, the police left us go and we watched the movie. That evening I told my mom that Ivan told me that his mom is dead, and she asked me: Why now? Why not when she dead? My mom doesnt like when I go on motorcycle so I couldnt tell her that it was because the police stopped us, so I told her that I didnt know why. She only said that this guy was so strange. End.
ni por leer ese tochooo Pero me he fijado en que basta que ponga "no entreis es una tonteria " para que venga todo dios (y me incluyo) ya lo vereis jajjajaja
Está muy bien escrito, alguna que otra falta por aquí y por ahí y la historia un poco extranya (sí, ny, no me funciona la tecla apropiada xD). "My mom doesn’t like when I go on motorcycles so I couldn’t tell her that it was because the police" No te olvides de la "s" ya que sin ella lo que has puesto es incorrecto. Un saludo
lo siento no se me ha ocurrido mandarmelo por mp pero si tanto molesta lo siento, lo primero que pone esq no teneis xq entrar.
pues que razón teneis, solo falta k ponga NO ENTREIS ES UNA TONTERIA para k todo dios venga a mirar k **** hay.. jajaj